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We didn't really get comments of how to change it, we mainly got questions asking about the doll Scarlett. 

One of the questions was 'how are we going to make the main character look like a doll?' our answer was already figured out, we had found a make up tutorial for doll inspired make up and hair on halloween. We also will use a doll costume to show that she is the doll. 

Paul asked how we would show that the doll is Scarlett within the opening. Well in the opening right at the beginning when the boys ask if they want to hear a scary story one of the boys will say "you all know the story of Scarlett? The doll girl who was left right here hundreds of years ago?" this indicates that when the flash forward occurs and Scarlett the doll is shown, the audience will know who it is. 

To clear things up, the doll is a girl who is a demon who kills people due to her haunted past. Throughout the whole film there are flashbacks where the audience find out about her haunted past. 

On Thursday we will try out the shots which are point of view and where a person is behind a person. We will also test the shots where the swing is swinging but you cannot see our body, so testing the speed we run out and catch the shot.